Unknown Absolute Poem by Andrew Tom

Unknown Absolute

Rating: 5.0


You've lost all of your credibility
Zero to absolute
The ground that you once had already lay on
sanked beneath the earth's core

Without reach, you're starting to lose control
Spiraling down towards the southern hemisphere
losing all hope, you just wouldn't know
leads you to the different parts unknown

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 June 2011

This is really a nice work. I like it for its vivid imagery and skilful description. A fine 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A busy street on page 1.

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