Monday, April 21, 2008

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Its the idea of speaking without talking
of dancing without moving
of celebrating without laughing
...of intranquility
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Issam Aladdin
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I can relate to this well as the thoughts are familiar to me. Keep it up, ! Ez.

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Joseph Daly 21 April 2008

I like this and the use of a word such as 'intranquility'. The structure of this is really great. The narrative doesn't appeal to me personally, but that is unimportant. I like that you show a good grasp of thing and that you are serios. Thanks Mate!

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