Wednesday, February 16, 2011

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When I thought I had wings
And I felt as if I could fly,
I did not know it was a dream,
With dawn which had to die.
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Subhashis Pattadar
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 16 February 2011

Very beautiful poem. But we should get ourselves out from unreal moments as soon as it's possible or we shall be the victim of haunted dreams. Very simple yet bewitching. I liked the poem. Nicely done. Please read my poem 'Let's make a new world' on p.2

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