Until My Last Breath Comments
Your eyes, words and mischievousness,
Your innocent half smile to me,
Your killer glance towards me,
Never shall I forget
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its nice how u arranged ur work... U started wt d start of d relationship d next line u talked bout d end of it,3rd line u wrote d good time and d last line d bad... I can sense emotion runin deep... Its a great work... And i lov it. I also feel it wat u felt wen u wrote diz... Mayb cos many of us hav been in dat road too... Read mine too... U myt jus lik some
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3/10/2026 3:57:59 PM # 1.0.0
its nice how u arranged ur work... U started wt d start of d relationship d next line u talked bout d end of it,3rd line u wrote d good time and d last line d bad... I can sense emotion runin deep... Its a great work... And i lov it. I also feel it wat u felt wen u wrote diz... Mayb cos many of us hav been in dat road too... Read mine too... U myt jus lik some. Its nice readin ur poem and gettin to knw u.