Priya Kapoor


Until My Last Breath - Poem by Priya Kapoor

Your eyes, words and mischievousness,
Your innocent half smile to me,
Your killer glance towards me,
Never shall I forget
Until my last breath.

Your sudden turning away from me,
Your change in attitude towards me,
Your hand that abandoned me,
Never shall I forget
Until my last breath.

Your silly anger at small issues,
Your sweet childish behavior,
Your jealousy when I talk about other guys,
Always will I love
Until my last breath.

Your false vows and promises,
Your ego during each instance,
Your silence which seemed you'll never speak again,
Always I will hate
Until my last breath.


Comments about Until My Last Breath by Priya Kapoor

  • Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose (1/22/2013 1:55:00 AM)


    its nice how u arranged ur work... U started wt d start of d relationship d next line u talked bout d end of it,3rd line u wrote d good time and d last line d bad...
    I can sense emotion runin deep...
    Its a great work... And i lov it.
    I also feel it wat u felt wen u wrote diz... Mayb cos many of us hav been in dat road too...
    Read mine too... U myt jus lik some.
    Its nice readin ur poem and gettin to knw u.
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  • Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose (1/22/2013 1:49:00 AM)


    its nice how u arranged ur work... U started wt d start of d relationship d next line u talked bout d end of it,3rd line u wrote d good time and d last line d bad...
    I can sense emotion runin deep...
    Its a great work... And i lov it.
    I also feel it wat u felt wen u wrote diz... Mayb cos many of us hav been in dat road too...
    Read mine too... U myt jus lik some
    (Report) Reply

  • Ezediuno Louis Odinakaose (1/22/2013 1:48:00 AM)


    its nice how u arranged ur work... U started wt d start of d relationship d next line u talked bout d end of it,3rd line u wrote d good time and d last line d bad...
    I can sense emotion runin deep...
    Its a great work... And i lov it.
    I also feel it wat u felt wen u wrote diz... Mayb cos many of us hav been in dat road too...
    Read mine too... U myt jus lik some
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 22, 2013


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