Until The Sun Burns Out To Death Poem by S.M. Samir Salman Shishir

Until The Sun Burns Out To Death

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Until the sun burns out to death
And the moon wear off its veil,
Until the ocean ceases to breathe
As the mountain fells flat with zeal
On the earth, I will not stop
Looking at your eyes so enticing
To my mind. The dew drop
Dries out as the sun is rising,
But my sea of desire for you remain
more youthful than ever.
I dedicate my odes to you,
I will keep my promises, remember.

Thursday, October 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: lonely
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 06 October 2016

Lovely romantic piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth in good poetic diction with insight. A beautiful poem well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing S.M. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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