Untitled 01 Poem by Ruby Diaz

Untitled 01

Rating: 5.0


Over a mountaintop,
a white bird lays.
Across the sea,
Is a pretty blue jay.
The soft songs are carried by wind,
Whispers of "I love you"
Silenced by the expanse.

Saturday, October 28, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,solitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 29 October 2017

Welcome to Poem Hunter Dotcom. Dear Ruby you have come to this sight with wonderful presentation like poem having a title' Wonderful' in which love provokes life. Beautifully crafted. Thank u dear Ruby, keep the ball rolling.10

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Ruby Diaz 30 October 2017

Thank you! :)

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 October 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Ruby D. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Luc Leclaire 28 October 2017

This is a lovely meditation on life.

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Ruby Diaz 28 October 2017

Thank you. 😃

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