Untitled Poem by Poems Should Rhyme

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I side with the demons
They know just as well
They live in the darkness of
The only hell

The sacred number
of 666
Lies just beneath
Where nothing exists

The shadows wait
With nothing to dread
They follow their leaders
And the fiery red

The red is blood
The ones of the saints
They lie motionless
In the devil's constraints

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 11 March 2012

Impressive! A well penned write that clearly shows your talent! The only thing that caught my immediate attention was the name you chose for is very controversial and would make many readers to question your talent! Rhyme brings harmony to the written words but the message embedded in the write will have a stronger impact. No everyone has the ability to play with rhymes but they may very good at expressing their thoughts in a poetic way! For this well penned I give a 10+++ Thank you for sharing! I hope you keep giving us more Food for Thought. God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City!

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