comatose


Untitled 2 - Poem by comatose

i serve what is right
it is my companion
it is my master
it is my slave
it is my tormentor

it serves me right
it is my companion
it is my master
it is my slave
it is my tormentor

im just a human being
nothing but a man
the burden of it all
is too much for just these two hands

i am a human being
nothing less than a man
the burden of it all
should be on these two hands

and so because of it i am begging in all the gates of heaven
and so because of it i am standing tall in all the ends of the earth

Listen to this poem:

Comments about Untitled 2 by comatose

  • (11/7/2007 10:38:00 AM)


    great write! ! i have no clue why someone gave you a one? ? : S its a 10 for me (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
Read all 1 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 7, 2007

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 23, 2011


[Report Error]