Untitled... Poem by Chyna Hughes

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you said you were in love,
but so was i...
you said he was youR 1st love
so i left uR dude behind...
because you weRe a qood fRiend
yall tReated eachother well
but im ok now,
a new Relationshyp feLL

today ii found a new love which ii caRed4 soo much
its bReakinq my heart, uR tempted too touch
leave my man alone
qo about ur buisness
ii did thee same 4u but....

chyna huqhes (13yrs of aqe)

this poem is complete. ii wrote it in about 5 mins juss to qet somethinq off my chest. its about this qirl (me) whoo had a crush on this dude 4ever and one day ii found out that one of my best friends was in love with him. ii admit ii was totally jealous that they loved eachother [ at first ]! ! ! ! after a while i juss mooved on and forgot about the dude. now ii have fallen in love again with some boy named naquan. and shes all over him. yes he is my boyfriend and weve been together forever now if anyone seperates me from this guy ii dont know if ill ever love aqain. ii gave up on a guy for her and ii want her to do me a favor and back off my man by returninq the favor. its killinq me im dying inside.

pleease leave COMMENTS & ADVICEE! thanxx aqain, tell me what you think i should do? ? ?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nathaniel Booker 04 September 2008

Hello Friend, My advice is never stop writing and when you finish a piece, don't offer too much in the way of explaining it as people will read it and there are times when a poem you write with one thing in mind, someone else may find a very different yet very real meaning in it and thank you from the bottom of their heart for saying what they were unable. You write great and your style is unique, there are some great writers here and in my experience with having my poetry read, your readers will be very astute as they'll be able to decypher your direction. Write Freely and Be Well, Nate

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