Monday, February 27, 2006

Unwanted Comments

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unwanted, cast aside
left to be swept along with the tide
the tide that takes with it all you care nothing about
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Lily Faust
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Alfredo Jacques 22 January 2007

This poem is very up lifting to know people feel the same as I do. great write. take care

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Brian Dorn 03 June 2006

Lily, being cast aside and feeling unwanted are difficult issues to deal with... I think your ending bodes ominous... good write! Brian

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Lily Faust

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