Andrew Hoffman


Watch us burn, watch us crumple
As we look into the nothin
Every choice that you make
Is a risk that you take
We will always bleed
But we will always succeed
Always trin to look foward
As we're lookin past this torture
And we don't care what it takes
To eliminate the fakes
We will fight all our fears
And we will learn from our tears
We're not mean but we're assertive
'Cuz our hearts are all deserted
Our heads will remain high
Wishing upon stars in the sky

Poem Submitted: Monday, October 12, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 13, 2009

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Comments about Uprising by Andrew Hoffman

  • Gold Fish (10/13/2009 9:33:00 PM)

    A great read. I feel this overarching theme running through the lines of the poem that no matter how hard life is, regardless of the cost, you will persevere and ultimately succeed. This is a truly heartfelt message that is inspirational. Thanks for sharing.10+

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