Sunday, October 18, 2015

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You shred my skin, for all those to see,
In your next words you say you love me,
Your words are like darts.
You actions like fire.
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Rob Spiering
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Melvina Germain 19 October 2015

Oh dear the sadness of loves hurt, so many can relate. You paint the story true, excellent poem...10

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Liza Sudina 18 October 2015

Familiar story! Your words are like darts. You actions like fire. I met such temptations too. I found the same way out to Lord!

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