Evelyn Diaz

Rookie (February 18,1993 / Modesto, California)

Used - Poem by Evelyn Diaz

we shared our worries our hate
he was just a lie
we talked and laughed
but instead in his head he was laughing at his plan all along
i told him i couldnt take this life
he said he would alway be there
i told him it didnt matter anymore
he kissed my lips gently i pushed him away
told him this couldnt be
but he was hungry for more
i got up but he held me down
i told him i couldnt and i wouldnt
as i ran out the door....

Comments about Used by Evelyn Diaz

  • Karima Astrid P (10/28/2008 8:09:00 PM)

    nice love it: D....... (Report) Reply

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  • Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello (3/28/2008 4:50:00 PM)

    This is a story of activity-passivity, pleasure-regret. It isn't ended, is it? Anyway, you've told it well. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 28, 2008

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