Declan Barwell

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Utopia - Poem by Declan Barwell

Only when those
whom control and
the masses have
lost control
only when those
whose words can
deceive the weak
and the weak have
risen will the
governments fall,
the world burn
and only the strong
will see what rises
out of the ashes of
civilisations and
rejoice for he is
our saviour.

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

A dis-utopian poem, inspiring people to try to make a difference in the world. Not a jab at religions, note the use of a lower case h in he, second to last line. Representing that anyone can be a saviour.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 20, 2012

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