poet Hasmukh Amathalal

Hasmukh Amathalal

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Beauty

Learned poets have said “beauty is to enjoy”
Like fresh flowers always give you joy
Don’t attempt to pluck or destroy
Not to play with it as simple toy

Thing of beauty is joy for ever
Ever lasting and fading never
Liked by eyes and smelt by nose
Fresh fragrance of flower always like rose

Is beauty confined to physical appearance?
Does inner beauty find no substance?
Is that looking so important and imposing?
No matter whether it denied or trust reposing?

Beauty not to be taken from sex point of view,
It is acknowledgement of grace and dews
what matters most is simple praise and fact?
Leaving behind all games and not to look suspect

Even God is given another name for beauty
Universal acknowledgement for kindness but not pity
We al raise out hands for its grace
Meet all with happiness and embrace

There lies beauty in all the objects around
Happiness and joy is everywhere found
This speaks good and seems so sound
Love spell all over and relations are bound

It may not spread hatred but only brotherhood
It may not confine to area or only neighborhood
It has its own role to play and not hide
Everything so open and nothing to confide

History may not repeat that the bloody wars were fought
Beauty has always ruled and cooperation sought
Queens, princess were married for the sake of peace
Not to shed blood but for stability and life at ease

We may not undermine the essence of beauty
Protect it from further harm and consider it as duty
Let us praise and preserve it as God’s gift
No fight, no tension and with out any rift

We may not get chance to prove anywhere
There is slight ray of hope somewhere
It is always to be seen and understood
Love serves as supplement to energy and food



No one has been able to define what is love?
What is its origin and how it affects nerve?
Why person loose concentration and go for it
Why path is clearly seen even if path is dimly lit

Love is simple way of leading and sacrificing
It is got no comparison or tag for pricing
It happens just with the change of time and place
There is no room for competition or mad race

We shall see to it that it mushrooms
All flowers open up with booms
Fragrance add to beautiful scene
Nature at its best peak never seen

Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 19, 2009
Poem Edited: Monday, July 11, 2011

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Comments about Beauty by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Jitesh ShahJitesh Shah (3/24/2015 9:37:00 PM)

    lovely very nice sir i like it

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  • Panmelys PanmelysPanmelys Panmelys (2/13/2015 7:23:00 AM)

    Beauty lies within the eye of the beholder, and describing it therefore has as many skins as an onion, so never stop
    loving beauty, in all its wonderful colors, shapes, smells, tastes, memory, sound, touch and abstract fantasy which allows the imagination to fly above all worldly worries, stresses, upheavals, to make it shine forever as the brightest star in the universe. Panmelys

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  • Ajit ChalihaAjit Chaliha (8/1/2010 12:06:00 AM)

    Any, and all attempt to describe, to feel, and to elaborate 'BEAUTY' can never be criticized. But in the poem too many issues(points) were tied up, which diluted the appreciation of 'beauty'. Particularly in the stanza about sexual implication was off colour.

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (12/29/2009 1:39:00 AM)

    ‘Thing of beauty is joy for ever’ – Keats …well incorporated in your Poem Sir…

    In your every poem my slumberous psyche comes alive…
    10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

    PS Cordially invite to my page…
    niv

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  • Charlotte Andreski (12/27/2009 8:26:00 PM)

    So beautiful, so enlightening!

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  • Seema(Aanamika) 80 (12/22/2009 11:51:00 PM)

    A very beautiful poem on beauty.Excellent piece..10+

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  • Joseph Poewhit (12/10/2009 2:10:00 PM)

    Beauty is in the eye's of the beholder

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  • Katey Dempsey (11/30/2009 7:35:00 AM)

    It has its own role to play and not hide
    Everything so open and nothing to confide

    10

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  • Rafique Farooqi (11/22/2009 12:23:00 AM)

    Learned poets have said beauty is to enjoy
    Like fresh flowers always give you joy
    Don’t attempt to pluck or destroy
    Not to play with it as simple toy

    Thing of beauty is joy for ever
    Ever lasting and fading never
    Liked by eyes and smelt by nose
    Fresh fragrance of flower like rose

    Is beauty confined to physical appearance?
    Does inner beauty find no substance?
    Is that look so important and impose?
    No matter whether it denies or trust repose?

    beauty is our ornament in life we must take care of it, and keep it in tact....a beautiful poem....i like this one very much

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  • Almedia Knight-Oliver (11/19/2009 1:58:00 PM)

    Vivid images and fresh perception of beauty...thanks for inviting me to your poems...a 10

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  • Louis RamsLouis Rams (11/8/2009 6:30:00 PM)

    beauty is a gift of god.
    and everything in life, plays a big part.

    a ten

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  • Mrs. Blue (11/2/2009 8:10:00 PM)

    Lovely. I always enjoy when people put there interpretation of beauty into words. A very lovely and unshallow view of beauty. Beautiful.

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  • Akram SaqibAkram Saqib (11/1/2009 6:52:00 AM)

    etennal is the ultimate beauty
    love it and enjoy

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  • Eyan Desir (10/27/2009 6:30:00 PM)

    Its a nice poem but
    this doesn't hit the nail on the head...

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  • Keith Mclennon (10/14/2009 12:35:00 AM)

    this poem really spoke such passion i was honor to read this poem

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  • Anand Madhukar (10/12/2009 10:17:00 AM)

    You manage to smoothly capture the true essence of beauty in this piece.

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  • Jen Capaldi (10/10/2009 4:23:00 PM)

    your poem captures yet another aspect of beauty. the beauty of true insight and the words to express it. poem is a wonderful read and also a think peice. in your second stanza you post a very much forgotten aspect of beauty in these days of vanity. the true beauty of a person is not in their external appearance but in the inner beauty that makes them the person that they are. your poem has great form, great rhyme, and most importantly a great queation to pose to all...... what is the true beauty of life; internal, external, divine, and worldly beauty. a wonderful poem, a wonderful read, a wonderful poet.10's all of the way my friend.
    Jen

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  • AtreyaSarma Uppaluri (10/8/2009 12:26:00 PM)

    Your poem of nine beautiful stanzas on (inner, universal & divine) beauty has put me on cloud nine. A melodious poem with good rhyme.

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  • Swatimalya Chattopadhyay (10/5/2009 12:22:00 PM)

    Beauty does not limit itself to the external one but also encompasses inner beauty.Divine beauty comes from within.Inner beauty finally surpasses the exterior one.Beautifully defined 'beauty' by the poet.

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  • Mohammed AlbalushiMohammed Albalushi (10/4/2009 1:30:00 AM)

    ur poem is anther name of the beauty, i really enjoy reading it, well done +10

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