Friday, January 22, 2016

Utopian Being Comments

Rating: 5.0

Have you ever aspire to chimerical life?
It's like octopus with countless sharp arms
Burning Incense for revolting, opaque love
Sweet odor of wholeness is my opium pipe
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Marika Kartozia
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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 January 2016

A sense of gaiety banishes stories from the past, a beautiful line. Really, utopia is a planet of myths and is bewildering. Thanks for sharing this beautiful poem.10 points.

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Marika Kartozia 22 January 2016

Thank you :)

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