Valentine's Without You Poem by Shahad Raad

Valentine's Without You

Rating: 5.0


In the Night of Valentine's.
The lovers recreate and drinking wine.
The candles floodlight the the tables when they dine
in the star-full sky the love moon shines

Despite me
In is the Night of Valentine's.
Im crying, Wiping my tears
I'm dying & saying that I'm fine

In the Night of Valentine's.
You said that u'll return tomorrow
and now it's 2009
When will u come?
till when I should wait?
please' just give me a sign
It is the night of valentine's

Do you hear me?

Tuesday, February 17, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: night,valentine
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 23 July 2009

Separations are full of longing's for return of loved one, your cry I hope is heard.

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Melissa Thompson 15 May 2009

I like your style.nice

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Maxim Muyu 21 February 2009

This is all very great and I love the great syle contained in it.

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Sandy Vanity 17 February 2009

that was a very sad poem and i loved i realy felt it and i know how it feels.

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Fay Slimm 17 February 2009

A sad cry from the heart Shahad - - but well written and has some apt phrases which describe the night very well...... a 10 from me - best wishes from Fay...

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