No To Violence (The Peace Doves) Poem by Shahad Raad

No To Violence (The Peace Doves)

Rating: 5.0


Whan I wake up in the morning
I opened my eyes
I was amazed by the beauty of the pure sky
I saw the flock of doves fly
I closed my eyes
A rain fall on me! but it is a pure sky! !
I opened my eye
I found the doves cry
I asked them why?
Doves: The beauty will die
I asked them why?
Doves: the ill-fate is near by
They said that and then bye.

Boomb! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
All beauty painted with red and black dye
In the middle of the fire my doves fry

I wrote that because that is realy happening every day in Iraq and the Doves are the children, please save the rest of the doves by putting your hand in my hand and saying (no to violence)

Shahad Raad-Iraq/Babylon

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 20 August 2008

a 10 has been clicked for this heart-felt expression. we are always with you.

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Kris Smith 20 August 2008

All hearts are with the children, this is not the way of the future, we must live for the peace we deserve. My prayers are with you and all your people Chris 10

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Bob Blackwell 22 July 2009

Shahad, your plea should be heard all over the world, children should not have to grow up with violence. A well written plea, I hope it is heard. Like you I hate violence. Regards Bob Blackwell

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Greenwolfe 1962 02 September 2008

I love that you wrote the explanation at the end. This poem can be nothing but a 10. Less would incline a foul purpose in my pesonal view. For such would have no heart. Blessed be the children! GW62

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Shalini Kts 22 August 2008

A BIG NOOOOOOO TO VIOLENCE.... nice poem

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~A Little Blue Bird~ 21 August 2008

What a sad thing: (Poor kids. That was the best poem I have ever read about Iraq. Write from the heart- ~The Little Blue Bird~

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Farouq Ali 20 August 2008

BEAUTIFUL its well expressed nd nicely done .. we are ALL wid u p.s i wrote a poem nd dedicated to u..its called A respond!

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