Vessel Creation Is The One Poem by Drake Kinkaid

Vessel Creation Is The One

Rating: 5.0


Send some more of that pretty dollar...

Can't handle; so you fold open to scream the softest of hollars.

Make it a little easier to swallow...

Your mind is a tunnel sealed away to be hollow.

Get in line and be the next one to follow...

Depend on tomorrow...

We dig ourselves a grave that we later will borrow.

Nirvana or sorrow?

Easy to choose but it takes nothing to lose...

So what do you say to a void that's ok?

You put out for the effort and get a gift everyday.

Keep all full of color to take away from the grey...

Let's make a fourtune off such the small value.

Vessel creation is the one that allows you...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Faduma M 04 November 2008

Great poem And i really mean it... 'Get in line and be the next one to follow... Depend on tomorrow... We dig ourselves a grave that we later will borrow.'' Those lines are really true you indeed are a poet in your own unique kind of way all i have to say is 10++++++++++ Great Job: D

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*Trusting You* 04 November 2008

Keep all full of color to take away from the grey... I like that line... good job. *Purkey Girl*

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