Wise Man Poem by Drake Kinkaid

Wise Man

Rating: 5.0


A wise man once told me the way of the world...

He showed a new road I could have

Each word said my ear truly hears

Told me to always keep an eye through our fear

Kick back and just have some more beer

Make your enviroment one for the cheer

Its just a fight for your age, and soon this new time will be blessed with another fresh page...

A birds eye is in our view for the grab

So don't get on your knees for the riches and wonder...

All that comes out is a weak view and a plunder

Its the long test with gradual study; and I kept my feet down this road that is bloody

You observe so hard at the ones that surround

They try so wrong that their purpose will never be found

How does that sound?

Appealing to your head?

You should never quit looking for a home within bounds

The one that's out and around

Gotta climb to the top of the mound...

To catch a fish you'll need some bait on the hook, and all this will be is the first of your look

So have a life to be noticed; the strongest phrase in our book


For the ones that know the path of this world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 16 November 2008

Its just a fight for your age, and soon this new time will be blessed with another fresh page... great line. this is very good. I like it a lot. good job. Becca Purkey

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Estrella Baldemosa 12 November 2008

you have a lot to say Drake, I wish it is clearer for an average reader like me.

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Joseph Poewhit 11 November 2008

I was stationed in Germany in the army in1978-79. Loved Germany and Europe beer, wine, Frauliens know how to dress. KEEP WRITING

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Sarwar Chowdhury 10 November 2008

Significant thoughts penned beautifully......10++++

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Katz Haus 10 November 2008

I don't know if this was intentional, but it would make a very good rap song.

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