Sunday, July 15, 2018

Vintage Of Your Age Comments

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If I am doomed to never taste your lips;
young, anxious grape, eager for the wine
though intoxicated by your swaying hips
I will not take you early from the vine.
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Captain Cur
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 26 July 2018

Excellent Captain 1600 born death all know now will only after the occurrence will announce ere upon me u pounce I let ye savour the wine which has to yet change form off the vine and when she says be mine feel her under as does you Divine and for the next few centuries love labour and ports refine drinking all kinds of different wines preferably red as is mine

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Captain Cur 27 July 2018

A beautiful comment dear Poet Poet! Does honor the captain and the wine and holds in view his tender grape that draws her power from the vine on rolling hills of tree lined grace.

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Robert Murray Smith 15 July 2018

A poem full of flavour and waiting.++10

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