Vision Poem by Hans Raj Sharma

Vision



Praise-
Indubitably
Fogs the vision
As love blinds
Even the wise.

Divulges-
Repugnance
The face value
And powers
Can’t augment
Prestige
And expertise.

Whereas-
A tribute
Or genuine
Applause
Like a tonic
Endows with
Inspiration
And back-up
Similar as
Silent waters
Run deep.

Flattery-
The worst
Form of praise
Feeds with
Empty spoon
Head over heels
Overcooked
As mockery
Over flowing
Its banks.

Earshot-
Of true criticism
With patience
Unprovoked
Be it sharp
Or scathing
But, untouched
Confidence
And composure
Cultivating upbeat
And apt
Upset not
A steady mind
Not even attacks
If slightly
Standing firm
And straight
Like a rock
Pursuing
The noble cause.

Criticism-
Sharpens intellect
And broadens
One’s approach
Visually making
The things look
More beautiful
And striking
Prompting
Better vision
And understanding
Around the world.

-Copy right hrsharma
Ludhiana, Punjab, India

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Genuine praise and true criticism sharpen intellect and broaden one's approach.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 09 April 2015

A wise and intelligent look at the subject. I agree. Thanks for sharing, Hans Peace

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