Vision Poem by kimuel camanian

Vision

Rating: 3.5


Philippines is a country just like flower
Blessed with beauties of nature,
A country that has
Their own distinctive culture.

Philippines is a blessed country
The one thing it lacks is diligence and cooperation
Philippines a country of corrupted and poor
People always bring a ton of problems in their back.

Don't let destiny laugh at us
So if we strive harder, all our lost will become our gain
Philippines might become a better country one day,
Because if we strive harder, we know that there's still a way.

Wednesday, December 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,justice,poem,poetry
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Philippines a land beauty and despair
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 15 December 2016

Your English teacher must be proud. This is the fifth poem I have read in the last half hour, all with the same title and all about the Philippines. Welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Kimuel Camanian 14 December 2016

i hope you like my poem.

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