Visualization Poem by Noel Horlanda

Visualization

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Looking beyond on a pinnacle,
there appeared an outline, something,
transfigured into structure of concrete posts,
seeing through framed glass windows, massive doors,
beyond imagination in all splendor stood before me,
immaculately white, indescribable, perfect!
one couldn’t accept, it’s incredible, horrendous,
whispered to myself, could this be all mine? Am I that rich?
I started taking small steps, nearer, sweating cold,
French doors opened wide as I enter,
looking up inside, here, there, magnificent,
that’s all I can say...

Life beats deep in me soundless, countless,
as I explore the wonders inside, rooms like isthmus,
I hurried upstairs, steps winding in carpet, draperies,
witnessed once more indeterminable quarters without corners,
slowly now, drifted down, caressing the balusters,
I find myself outside, stared at the massive white edifice,
and declared in me this is where I live from now on, .
I turned my sight, there in another corner,
three powerful machines, black, beige and fire red,
sits on a tombolo and a uniformed chauffer leaning on,
quietly my fingers began to feel the smooth skins of each,
held the wheels, touch the music box, my spirit in the air.

On a switchback road now laughing, loud singing, you hear
the power in my hand roared, sped up to an infinite sunrise,
the vision in me opens up, the never-ending flowing fluid held,
in cupped hands wanting to terminate my euphoria,
What cause all these?

A set of numbers courtesy from a beautiful mind, my dear friend..
Visualize is the magic word, she advised. I won!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 13 June 2010

Expresses finery of psyche…though longish… Finish is touchy… Ms. Nivedita UK

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 14 September 2009

long and good is this poem!

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Surya . 04 July 2009

really beautifull composition and fine imagination. voted10 surya

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Catrina Heart 21 March 2009

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! THIS IS A STUNNING POETIC COMPOSITION...I LOVED YOUR ENDING LINE.........VISUALIZE IS THE MAGIC WORD, IN EVERY ARTISTIC CREATION WE VISUALIZED THE IMAGE, OUR SELF, OUR CREATION TO MAKE MORE INTO LIFE.............10

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