Vow On Poem by M.J. Lemon

Vow On

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I took a vow of poverty
not by design not by choice
but with the training wage in youth
that paved the way for the
minimum wage in my dotage
preventing retirement
and spurring my credit card
company to offer four
easy payments with affordable interest
for every grocery purchase

My neighbour's competitive
instinct arrived early in life
and introduced him to a vow
a vow of celibacy
By choice? Perhaps
through cultivated elegance
I refuse to judge though what
might that finger residing in his nose say?
Or the tracksuit worn at soirees?
Or the salad fork buried deep
in the dumpling left
at the bottom of the soup bowl?

What screams at the family dinner
more than the host
irate at and about
the politics spilling out of mouths
as wine flushes in?
The toddler about to celebrate
a second birthday?
The cousin whose devotion
to his hometown sports heroes
cannot be left unheralded?
The nagging aunt
who asks
Can't you get
a real job or at least
Be more like your neighbour?
It is the silent prayer
a summons for the
vow of silence

Sunday, June 28, 2026
Topic(s) of this poem: heroes,poverty,retirement,sports,toddler
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 28 June 2026

2) cont'd: Tragically, he's become a jester sidekick in Trump's administration! Such great potential only to be ridiculed!

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M.J. Lemon 03 July 2026

Great observations, Richard. Yes, there is a lot of Hillbilly Elegy in this verse. There is a distinct shift from the 'tragic' to the comic. Thanks so much, my friend!

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Richard Wlodarski 28 June 2026

M.J., this is a profound piece of writing with great wry humour! As I was reading it, Hillbilly Elegy came to mind. Initially, the book and Vance's life were very inspirational.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 June 2026

A masterful creative work. Discerning, very interesting, and gripping adorned with superb imagery. Top Marks and to my favorites.

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M.J. Lemon 03 July 2026

Thank you for reading and adding this to your favourites, Rose Marie. Thanks so much!

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