Friday, May 12, 2017

Voyage In The Sea Of Pain Comments

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On my rectangular patches of what used to be a mattress
Lies afew kilograms of my 18 year old body
The aura around is calm
But my mind is disturbed
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Jazib Kamalvi 12 May 2017

Suffering from any wound, external or internal, is a necessary condition for great poetry. Thanks

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Tinashe Mupedzapasi 12 May 2017

But the tale takes on another course...its so painful when things change negatively...thanks for sharing.

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Rajnish Manga 12 May 2017

Very poignant portrayal of a disturbed mind is which is 'Unable to suppress the effect of the depression'. You have an impressive style. Thanks, jojji kaka. Down sank the titanic / On its maiden voyage And in the same spirit...... / Down sank my soul

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