Voyage To The Destiny Poem by Shilpa Chaganti

Voyage To The Destiny

Rating: 4.3


Deep in the silent darks,
wandering and swaying around
I was, once content with life full
and concern less.
None to lad me with the
burdens of responsibilities,
nor someone to share
my loneliness.

Life held for me little surprises,
and even fewer
excitements in the
monotonous chores.
On one such dark
expeditions, was i broke off
my usual routine
when I met her...

Imperfect she was...
And also intruding and irritating..
But I too was not more
perfect, and longed to
give her company and also,
to have her presence.
She was always there- Sometimes distracting
and some others even annoying-
Pricking and pinching and
stinging me now and then.

I did it all-
Soothing her and
cajoling, as she
Screamed and chided me.
Eventually, and gradual it was,
she too showed a change-
Sublimed was she and
also softened

My love and patience blooming
and bearing fruits,
She glowed brightly with
strong sensuality
and delicate frailness.
A gift she was... Although in disguise! !
I cherished her beauty and form,
with all the reverence I could muster...

I loved her too much to leave,
making the inevitable parting
even more impossible...
She vanished suddenly
as she had once appeared..
As a pearl, most distinguished
and unique...
Abandoning me there...
A deserted oyster to die
In the still waters of unending depths..

Thursday, April 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: destiny,heartbreak,journey,love,ocean,voyage,water
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 07 September 2017

She vanished suddenly as she had once appeared.. As a pearl, most distinguished and unique... Abandoning me there... A deserted oyster to die In the still waters of unending depths.. in the last but one stanza you become vry positive about her and finally ends up saying that she vanished. playing with emotions..love and heartbreak pictured so well my dear poetess thank you very much. tony

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Nidhi Agrawal 09 August 2017

A beautiful poem on love and heartbreak.

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Shilpa Chaganti 17 August 2017

Thanks.. I feel a heartbreak is what strengthens our heart and soul..: ')

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Rajnish Manga 02 May 2017

This reads like a case study of two girls who complemented each-other after their initial hiccups. And Lo! When they became good friends, the girl who entered the narrative somewhat later, just disappeared leaving the other in a shattered state of mind. This throws light on various aspects of human psychology. Thanks for sharing such a wonderful poem, Shilpa. I was, once content with life full / when I met her...Imperfect she was... I too was not more / perfect, and longed to / give her company

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Shilpa Chaganti 06 May 2017

:) very imaginative and likely plot you came up with.. very pleased you could see the depth in it so well. To tell you the truth, when I was writing this, I was thinking of a scenario where a guy has a secret crush on his best friend and the girl finds her love in someone else, leaving him heartbroken... :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 May 2017

As a pearl, most distinguished and unique... Abandoning me there... A deserted oyster to die In the still waters of unending depths.. these lines are really very poetic lines....... she suddenly disappeared and your expressions are wonderfullllllll. thank you dear poet.

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Shilpa Chaganti 06 May 2017

Thank you Dr. Tony, for the nice feedback and hope to be able to write more of poems that everyone enjoys...

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Khairul Ahsan 29 April 2017

@Shilpa Chaganti The last two lines of your poem are excellent! 'A deserted oyster to die In the still waters of unending depths.. '

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Shilpa Chaganti 29 April 2017

Thanks a lot for your appreciation.. @Khairul

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