Adnes Zee


Waiting For Love - Poem by Adnes Zee

The stillness of the water
The calmness of the air
The tranquility of the sky
Reminds me how lonely my life is.

Watching the million stars at night
As I am bathing the moonlight
Closing my eyes as I listen to my heartbeat
Still, nothing's change even a little bit.

In the silence of my solitary room
I've got nothing to do when I'm there alone
Only staring at the four dull walls
Black and empty best describe my world.

Sadness dripped my heart
It really torn me apart
Slowly tears rolled down on my face
Feeling the essence of loneliness.

I just wish that someone's here with me
Wiping my tears to dry away
Someone to comfort and love me
When I'm depressed and weary.

Someone that I can hold at night
And can embrace me back so tight
Someone who would lovingly whisper
The magical words of love in my ear.

I've been longing for that someone to come
Someone who would love me for who I am
Ready to accept my weaknesses and strengths
Someone who would never leave me in vain.

I just wanted to be loved and needed
Experience how great love is
I want to know how it's like if my heart beats faster
By just a mere stare from someone I care.

I've been waiting for the love all my life
Keep wondering if I could find the right
But all I could do is to wait
And there's nothing I can do about it.


Comments about Waiting For Love by Adnes Zee

  • (5/8/2011 3:18:00 AM)


    Great poem. Very well described. Great imagery and style. Excellent stuff. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, May 8, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 21, 2011


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