Waiting For You Poem by Oghenero Benefit Evabeta

Waiting For You

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CALL:
Alone in this lofty and deserted place,
Have I patiently and eagerly waited.
Among men each day have I search your face;
Each time have I been disappointed.
Your absence seems to me a punishment;
Your presence I longed for my relieve.


RESPONSE:
"Distance" they always say,
"Make the heart grow fonder."
I know the feeling; got me thinking all day,
How committed we are, even than a lover
But I pray thee, thou shoud tarry a little while
Still have lots of cooking to do


CALL:
What's all these appearing?
Not too nice to hear.
Thy absence is due to cooking?
How sour it sound in the ear.
Should cooking be element to neglect,
And seeing a sister as garbage?


RESPONSE:
Oh! My intent you wrongly explain.
Food preserve the skin room dying;
A waste effort much to my disdain.
My 'FOOD' let lives keep living.
Poetic words like the spiritual,
Very obscure; especially to the carnal.


CALL:
The life clock is ticking so fast,
Trivially the time is still.
And now we are older than the past,
Boom! Death caught us neglecting our will.
I pray thee: bargain not with death;
Because being nature, none can cheat.


RESPONSE:
Like crossword puzzle, can't decifer your line.
Send my memory into an endless journey.
I pray death absence when I dine
Till I reveal the mystery of misery
Knows clock ticks, time's still and death's sure,
My destiny I fulfill; my mission will I complete.


CALL:
Words making the dead jealous
Envious of we yet living
Life's good; Alas! Each steps is dangerous
Only the determined keep on going
But tell me, what Keep you floating?


RESPONSE:
"And I shall fly high
Not that I won't die
But before the die be cast
I would have been above the sky"
My ink is almost dry
Yet, I've got many things to write
But to put things alright,
Am now around: can we see tonight?
©Evabeta Blessing Benefit

Waiting For You
Friday, July 5, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
She posted few days ago and after reading in lines and stanzas, I commented. "Am waiting for your own" was her response. It seems I miss her but don't know why I said Austin Efe Jane, am 'cooking' when she asked me where I am.
So I pen down this piece in call and response for her to decode.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
A B Faniki 10 August 2019

Intresting and delughful poem to read. Thsnks for sharing such brilliant piece. Keep them coming

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Jazib Kamalvi 10 July 2019

A good start with a nice poem, Oghenero. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Thank you @Chinedu Dike for your comment.

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Chinedu Dike 05 July 2019

Really a unique and insightful rendition from the heart. A beautiful work of art elegantly brought forth in good rhyme scheme with artistic brilliance. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing, Benefit.

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