Waiting For You Poem by jerrah mae apelado

Waiting For You

Rating: 4.0


here i am
alone in the dark
waiting for my sunshine

here i am
feeling so cold
wishing for a hug

here i am
so sick of you
oh! when will you come back?

Surely!
the years have come passed
its okey if youre with me!
but without you
living with out you....
is the WORST thing ever!

Oh! Please! i wanna live with you!
Dont leave me alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Natasha Kirke 05 December 2010

I really like this! It is quite heart breaking. You describe and express your feelings of love really well with visual and descriptive language. I can almost imagine how you feel! I hope you find this person some day. :)

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Joseph Poewhit 08 July 2010

Who knows in time? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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