Waiting Room Poem by Je'free Y .

Waiting Room

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The abode of tears:
Tears of joy and tears of sadness.
The house of traceable stressed contours,
And relieved smiles on faces.
The temporary prison
Of the pessimistic and the optimistic.
The dwelling place of controlled fear,
And uncontrolled pounding of the temples.

The gray area in dire need
Of a verdict in black and white.
The realm of flotation
Yearning for a solid ground.
The space of the longest hours,
And the most confusing moments.
The residence of hunger for an answer,
For truth or for any information.

The limbo of intense prayers,
Of divine interventions.
The chamber of hesitant visitations,
And hurried exits.
The true testing ground
Of faith, hope and love.
The factory of a hero, a martyr,
The patient one.

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Excellent! Enjoyed the read.

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Tai Chi Italy 03 December 2007

I do so agree with Aldo, it is a brilliant piece of your heart and I am sorry for any pain and your loss. I know these feelings too well. There are so many wonderful lines here to pick one or two out, isn't possible. Well done, Tai

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Aldo Kraas 26 October 2007

This poem is excelent You did a wonderful Job with this poem

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