Friday, September 12, 2014

Waiting Silently Comments

Rating: 4.5

White clouds forming walls within skies, a soul flies up
among them and hides.

Feeling empty, lonely, yet a quiet peace has filled it
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Dr Library @ Debadarshi 13 September 2014

A beautiful portrayal of the cloud.... First stanza was brilliant....Many times when i gaze at them I find a scintillating space , with enough reasons to be happy, sometimes as if one can't hide from them... They just make you sweep through your nostalgic accounts, console..... Brilliantly written..... Thank You....

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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