Walk Poem by Jahid Onik

Walk

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I was looking for shelter
I was looking for food
I was walking all alone through the journey of life,
I was pretending not to be unhappy.

Maybe it was fateful
Or a conflict between two dimensions of time,
You found me.
You spread your kingdom inside me
You ruled me like a queen.

You taught me how to walk
Taught me how not to walk.
Whispered into my ears
'Walk like a stranger
Walk like a stranger so that nobody can recognize you
Walk like a stranger so that another stranger can recognize you.'

Walk
Saturday, March 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 30 January 2020

You taught me how to walk Taught me how not to walk. Whispered into my ears- very fine poem dear poet. tony

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 September 2019

such a nice poem, Jahid. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 August 2019

Maybe it was fateful Or a conflict between two dimensions of time, You found me. You spread your kingdom inside me You ruled me like a queen. profound words and expressions written in an endearing tone.. tony

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