Friday, October 13, 2017

Walk Into The Waters Comments

Rating: 5.0

Of early as I remember, days maybe, moments galore.
There was a glimpse of sheen and glee on my face, reflected in the stagnant pool at the edge of the sea.
Have I lost enough or some ounces are yet to be shaken off me?
I had no answer, Nor advice to follow.
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Vinit Kumar
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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 October 2017

I kept my silence on the outside, reflected in a happy smile...very nice poetic imagination..! An beautiful poem is shared.10

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Vinit Kumar 23 October 2017

Thank you for your words Mr. Dilip. :)

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Chinedu Dike 14 October 2017

You've painted a vivid picture. Lovely piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Vinit.

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Vinit Kumar 23 October 2017

Thank you so much Chinedu :)

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