Walk Slowly At My Burial Poem by Leslie Philibert

Walk Slowly At My Burial

Rating: 5.0


Take the pace out of step,
the black beetle crunches over gravel,
a block of ice, stupid silence

carried like a china cup
nearly down, a ring of flowers,
the first prize packed like a gift;

six strong men are needed to carry
my boxed bag of bones,
flaps of skin and the old-man smell.

Hold on. A moth in a lampshade
couldn`t bruise its wings less;
scared of the fall into cold loam.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I write for myself.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elena Sandu 18 September 2013

Lol I could dream of this poem in many ways, thank you for giving me such freedom! Even when being dead we would stop everything only to observe the works of nature; or would the moth it be a teacher saying that everything goes on and off? Or I could go back to the start of the poem and dream of a different burial, mine. Maybe you have written this with fear in mind but for me is an exciting poem helping me to think search and feel my way out of that fearfilled box. Thank you!

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Babalola Augustine Adeola 08 September 2013

hmmm... scary a bit. a word for us all

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Ramesh Rai 07 September 2013

a melancholic write with beautiful metaphore.

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