Monday, November 8, 2004

Walkens 789 Comments

Rating: 3.0

THeir coming for you,
just wait and see.
Just when you felt safe,
they show their teeth.
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DAVID GERARDINO
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Tom Foster 08 November 2004

Cute little poem. The variance in script is distracting though. WOUld like To sEe It WithOUT ALL CAPS STUFF. Just my opinions though Still over all good poem Anyway Tom

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