Walking Sound Poem by Seán O Muiríosa

Walking Sound



I have come to new lands, new towns, this new city,
I have lived an experience that I like to think is new
And though this spirit here it misses what was pretty
I find rich repose in these rugged streets so true.

The ravenous Celtic beast brought shiny apartments; glamour.
While the Welsh streets still have cracks, winding alleys.
The former I don't wish to sell or put under the hammer
But the winding sloping streets clop with a lilting cacophony.

The importance of this sound I will carry with me
When I return home with fresh eyes, soulful feet
Walking the paved bleached pathways straight as geometry
Noticing the different echo, the different faces that I meet.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stuart Mason 11 July 2006

All of the rhymes in this are very good (innovative like) buuut that inversion in the first stanza last line to make true rhyme just bugs me, pedant that i am. Still, there's a good mood to this.

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