Straight lines,
Parallel tracks
Before me
East and West
In two minds
Metal screams
A deep echo.
To jump.
To even
Contemplate.
The feeling you have captured well, imagery grand, strange thoughts that run through our mind as we wait.
Sean, interesting how those thoughts run through our heads... I think you've captured the feeling quite well. Good stuff. Brian
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
yeah! your diverse experimentations in poetry are dignifiedly undeniable, Seán, keep it up.