Walking Through My Mind Poem by Poetic Flower

Walking Through My Mind



My thoughts swish through my mind like water in a cup
The demons that swallow my sould start eating me alive
My head pounds in anger and hatred
The world does not understand me
My angels have deserted me
I pray for them to come back
My hope is ever decreasing
What is lost is gone forever
Darkness is all I see
I cant comprehend why all this has to happen to me
I walk through my mind, lost, without anyone to guide me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marcus Mckinley 30 July 2010

the view of a pessimist seeing the cup always half empty. try turning the cup over. it might just drown those demons. nicely written

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