Wall Of Lies Poem by emily Sorrow

Wall Of Lies

Rating: 5.0


I hide behind this wall of lies
So no one can see how I really feel inside
For what I feel consists of pain and death
All of that inside my head
Everynight they swirl around
Which way should I choose to end it now
As I drag myself towards the kitchen
I see the knife glistening in the distance
Not much further now and I'll be with you
As I pull the blade across my neck, god im such a fool....
But as I see the light
I know I was right
To do this and not listen to you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 June 2011

This is really a nice work. I like it for its vivid imagery and skilful description. A fine 10. Thanks for sharing..... If you don't mind, please read and rate my poem 'A busy street on page 1.

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