Friday, June 17, 2011

Wall Of Lies Comments

Rating: 5.0

I hide behind this wall of lies
So no one can see how I really feel inside
For what I feel consists of pain and death
All of that inside my head
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emily Sorrow
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 June 2011

This is really a nice work. I like it for its vivid imagery and skilful description. A fine 10. Thanks for sharing..... If you don't mind, please read and rate my poem 'A busy street on page 1.

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