War Poem by victoria tsiolis

War

Rating: 5.0


why do they fight
when they know people are dying
why do do they kill
when the know people are crying
if peace is what they're afteer
why don't they stop fighting
if we had peace, there'd be no tears
or fears of loved ones dying
peace is like a happy place
that everybody shares
but from the way they keep on fighting
it seems like they don't care

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 07 April 2009

A good and thought provoking question has been put to the people of the earth.......if harmonay prevails, the planet will surely be a heaven devoid of any fights and wars...........so people should think on that considering the message conveyed in this poem...........10/10 Best Wishes Sameer

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