War Poem by Mehrdad Dadkhah

War

Rating: 5.0


Let me whisper a tale of 325 names.
Carved on tombstones yet it left us all pale.
Though digits to some maybe.
To some it is about robbed souls.
It didn't take much time,5 minutes and they were hollows

'Died for the good' was the epitaph they left behind. 
While their revenge and unspoken dreams were fated undone.
Oh! How inquiet I became by the soothing words that praised them as brave.
Burned my eyes those gleaming medals of theirs. It belied their joy the sadness they craved.

How sad that the answer eludes me still.
They were called brave but we knew that is not how it seemed.
How numb it made me feel the cruelty of war that became our norm.
I lampoon the forlorn feeling as their trace was forever covered in soil-like womb

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is about losing 325 comrades in the spun of 5 minutes. It's describing how they are referred as " brave souls" by the guys who are not harmed a bit while taking the medals of Honor and how despite trying to seem sad they can't hid their joy.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

The word "digit" also means the bones of our finger. Figuratively used to refer to fingers. I loved your using the word in the poem. Great

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Great poem against the ills of war. Most pertinent write. Highly poetic. May I invite you to my poem "Urned Ashed" echoing similar sentiments? Thank you.

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