Thursday, March 13, 2008

~~~! War Call! ~~~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

In tanks and trucks, off we go
Into the battlefield, can't say no
Let bullets fly, let blood flow
Don't let your mercy show.
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Joshua Cheung
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MCKENZi : ] 17 March 2008

nice poem! : ] i really like it. so appropriate for today, too much war in this world!

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Sarah Abdullah 17 March 2008

Nice poem ^_^ Good write

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Rajinder Singh 16 March 2008

lovely poem.for a child of 13 yrs to write such beautiful poem future is bright.

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Sarah Macbean 15 March 2008

I agree, this is a wonderful poem. It shows all of the emotion. I give you ten also!

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~ Soldier ~ ~girl~ 14 March 2008

hey joshua that was a great poem my grandfather was in the war in the UK and he died for the love of his country but great work i give it a perfected ten

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Joshua Cheung

Joshua Cheung

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