Thursday, July 3, 2014

Warrior Comments

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When days turn to night,
And the skies lose their light,
A warrior sits, searching...
Trying with all her might
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Ashlee Woods
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F J Thomas 25 July 2014

Ashlee what a tremendous expression of emotion! Sometimes the pain may soften for another; but sometimes one decides never to endure that again. This is beautiful.

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Colleen Courtney 03 July 2014

Although sad, the beauty of this is knowing that pain heals and broken hearts mend. There's always room for more then one warrior in our lives!

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Leah Ayliffe 03 July 2014

Nicely constructed poem that truly depicts the pains and suffering of a lost love. Well done!

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Gajanan Mishra 03 July 2014

with emptiness, let us see all, thanks,

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