Monday, May 9, 2016

Was It Arizona Comments

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Was it Arizona?

Endless road, in flat landscape of shrubs and sand, no elevations
no distant ridge of a mountain, no coast and sunlight gleaming on
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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 May 2016

Endless road, in flat landscape of shrubs and sand, no elevations no distant ridge of a mountain, no coast and sunlight gleaming on a calm ocean. Trapped, I drove slower and slower, doomed to drive on this road forever; the thought of getting out and start running, when I saw a few trees at the distance, soon some houses too and a petrol station, Loved these lines much. Nice poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 09 May 2016

Endless road, in flat landscape of shrubs and sand, no elevations no distant ridge of a mountain, no coast and sunlight gleaming on a calm ocean. Trapped, I drove slower and slower, doomed to drive on this road forever; the thought of getting out and start running, when I saw a few trees at the distance, soon some houses too and a petrol station, Nice descriptions. Loved the story underneath. Thanks for the poem. Subhas

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