Monday, December 28, 2015

Water Comments

Rating: 5.0

Water water what is coloure you
mix me where that is my colour
water water what size you have
pourr in anything that size is my
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arun jagoji jambhulkar
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Ratnakar Mandlik 29 December 2015

Beautiful yet realistic poem written on water, that could be the most precious commodity in future. Nice poem. Keep it up. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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arun jagoji jambhulkar

arun jagoji jambhulkar

dharmapur taluka-umred now bhiwapur
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