Tuesday, September 19, 2017

Water, aspirin, you Comments

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Water, aspirin, you. The sun burns!
The wind strikes holes into the leaves!
It grips! Time crowing ticks
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Kamiel Choi 04 October 2017

Nice dense poem. Where could I find the original? I imagine it would be more gripping. In the translation, I like the rendition of the last line.

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