Rajashree Balaram

Wax

A thousand candles
weep
at the altar.

Tears of man?
Tears of God?

Poem Submitted: Monday, November 8, 2004

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  • Rm. Shanmugam ChettiarRm. Shanmugam Chettiar (7/22/2008 1:04:00 AM)

    Deeply thought provoking. Why dont write some more. Yiu may see my poem:
    Concept of soul, concept of bith, concept of death, concept of soul and body ete
    Shamugam Chettiar

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  • Subramanian Thalayur Rathnam (9/26/2005 1:28:00 AM)

    Dear Rajashree Balaram,
    Your poem WAX is simple, elegant. dedicated writting!
    wish you all the best. I see an exceptional thought and expression in your poetry. Let's pray to the GOD, the almighty
    you are the one, who made it bright!
    Let the world feel your presence,
    let a warm glow reside,
    in the hearts, a little deep inside us
    lets live this life, and live it with pride!

    wish you all the best!

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